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Let's look at that sentence again.

The factories' emissions have created smog in the atmosphere.

This sentence is grammatically correct, but it gives the wrong emphasis. The sentence structure emphasizes the word factories and the reader may wonder which factories are being discussed. The important word in this sentence is emissions, not factories. How can we change this sentence to put the emphasis on the word emissions?