preposition from does
not fit very well. A better word choice is the phrase according
to. Look at the correction indicated below in red.
The greenhouse effect is one of the phenomena caused by
to the data taken by scientists, our earth has been warming
up since the Industrial Revolution. Why does it happen? The factories'
emissions have created smog on the atmosphere. The earth's atmosphere
becomes like a greenhouse, and the earth and everything inside of it
have become like the plants in a greenhouse. The sunlight can pass
through the ozone layer but the heat transferred by the sunlight can
not escape easily from the layer of smog and is deflected to the earth's